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On liking what you’re selling

sloth ML-1I realised this morning, whilst walking along a damp footpath, that I didn’t actually feel proud or happy with something I’ve been trying to submit to agents.

I started writing the Madcap Library stories for me; they were amusing, using sketches of characters based on things in my Library, odd people, weird situations that were crazy enough to be funny. I didn’t really have an audience in mind beyond ‘children’ and anyone who likes silly stories!

Then my illustrator and I were asked, about a year ago, to submit a proposal for a picture story using one of the characters (the Sloth) for 3-5 year olds. I admit I struggled to adapt the stories, but I wrote some new ones, adapted some old ones, picked out three…and I thought I’d done ok so we sent them off. We didn’t hear back (I know publishers are busy, but…) and so Hannah suggested submitting to other agents and publishers. I did some work and started pulling together lists, and got in the last month I’ve got rejections from the first two agents we submitted to. Well, keep trying, eh?

Well…no. It occured to me, on the aforementioned path, that I don’t actually like the stories I’m submitting. I’m not happy with them. I’m not confident in what I’m trying to sell.

I wrote the stories because I was asked to, and I don’t even think they’re right. They aren’t stories for 3-4 year olds – 6-7 at best, but probably older! I don’t want to write simplified stories. That isn’t me. I want to write the stories that are in my head for this character; I want a book with illustrations, not a picture book. There is always a degree of working to your market, yes. But when I’m struggling with what I’m writing, when I don’t like the product, when I haven’t got any passion in what I’m trying to pitch…

So I’m shelving the stories for a second time; I’m going back to the original concepts and I’m going to let them play. I’m going to be honest to myself about who the stories are written for and what I want to put in them. And hopefully, after that, I’ll be proud of what I’m trying to pitch to the outside world.

Feedback and progress

A wonderful friend of mine read the first three Greensky books when she visited me during the week. It was both nerve-wracking and wonderful – she went through them so fast! But she was squeaking while reading – I got “I ship them!” and “ahhhh they got together!” and “spotted another one!” and “their bond is SO weird!”…I was just sitting and laughing, because it was so wonderful to hear the comments that usually I wouldn’t get! She liked it, which is brilliant, and I was so proud and pleased. It’s the best feeling when someone likes a story and characters and world that you love – and Toru’s her favourite, which is wonderful as he’s mine too 🙂

It’s also lovely to be able to talk about the future of a series with someone – and to have “I want to see more of…” and “Are we going to see…” comments, then be able to say “Well yes, in the next book!”. It’s nice to know that I have looked at things that people want to read, and that the stories I’m telling are ones that people want to know about! So that’s wonderful too.

And the progress is on Madcap Library, of all things – although I really need to separate it, as technically it’s the Sloth. A publisher’s been interested in the Sloth as a stand-alone, and Hannah and I sent over some stories and sketches. Our contact wants to see the story with the Sloth as a stand-alone character (probably with Matilda as well, though), and so I’ve got to amend that and then let Hannah do some sketches. So that’s really exciting!

Madcap Library: a halt

I recently received some feedback from a publisher on the Madcap Library stories, and I wanted to put a bit of my reaction here.

I admit, it wasn’t nice feedback – actually, that’s unfair. It was very constructive, and it did have a lot of good points, but it was quite hard to read. The jist is that I need to work on my plots; I need simpler storylines; there are too many characters; the Library’s quite hard to understand; and none of the stories are really suitable for conversion to a picture book or for younger readers – all of which is quite true. Once I’d got past my automatic angry defence of my writing, I was able to admit that the feedback was right – and write a very nice thank-you letter to the lady who took time to give me her thoughts!

However, the problem is that I’ve known all of the above for a little while, and simply haven’t had the time – or brainspace – to rewrite. I was also recently given some ideas on Sloth stories by the wonderful Sir Sam, and although they all spark something, I just haven’t been able to get the words out. It’s as if there’s a block in my head preventing anything from being translated onto the page.

So, essentially, I’m taking a break from Madcap Library. I want – and need! – to rewrite old stories and write new stories. For the moment, there’s so much going on that, for a variety of reasons, I simply can’t do that. It’s frustrating as I want to spend time on it, but I think I need to formally shelve it for the sake of my sanity until – well, likely Christmas, I suspect.

I’ll still continue with other work; I’ve got to work out what I want to write for Nano 2014 (probably Heights & Horizons) and I also still have Desert Sands going round in my head. But the Sloth on rollerblades has temporarily been halted.

Madcap Library: a rethink

01/08/2014 12:01

I haven’t done much work recently on Madcap Library as a story. However, it has been simmering in the background with regards publishing. My illustrator, the wonderful Hannah Botma, has been in contact with a children’s publisher who are interested in the Sloth, and we’ve been discussing ideas for children’s books. I spoke to various people last week, and now have two challenges to work on: a story-book for children aged 3-4, and another for children aged 7-9.

Considering that I have accepted that Madcap Library is written for children aged 10 and up (mostly due to the vocabularly used), it means the stories I currently have aren’t really suitable. In addition, only two of them are entirely Sloth-based; they’re also not suitable for illustrated stories as they are. So…I have to write new stories. *lays hand on forehead* oh woe is me, I have to write stories about the most adorable Sloth ever! And he is one of my favourite characters (I think the Libraneer beats him, but only just, and the Devil’s a close second).

I’ve just written two basic plot outlines for the 3-4 year-old story; they were relatively easy, as it’s simply distilling the ideas down into their simplest format. I suspect I’ve still managed to make it too complicated, but at least it’s something to work on, and the stories made me smile. I’m going to send them over to my test reader to see what she thinks, at any rate.   The stories for the 7-9 year-olds are harder, and also made me think about Madcap Library more generally. I re-read Madcap Library this morning, and I’m not sure what I want to do with it. I’m not sure if the stories are good enough for publishing; I haven’t submitted them to anyone due to the fact they’re short stories and in a series and I didn’t think anyone would want them. But the need to revisit them has made me question that. If I re-wrote them, or at least the first ones, could they be submitted?

My one problem is plot. I am pretty useless at finding the problem to be solved in a story; I like letting the characters run riot and interact and generally cause havoc by themselves. They don’t usually need outside events to help with it! But I appreciate that it does give a hook, it does give a flow, and that a lot of my stories lack that. It’s particularly obvious in Madcap Library, because the stories are a lot simpler and shorter than my other writing. It’s a critique that keeps coming up, and it is something I need to work on.   So I think I may start again with the first Madcap Library story, and work on the basis of “How do we solve a problem like the Libraneer…”

Five facts: Madcap Library

27/06/2014 12:51

I was tagged on Facebook in a fun game to share five facts about my current main character, and I thought you guys would appreciate it too! I’m currently writing Madcap Library stories, so you get the Sloth…

1. He’s currently employed as a duster at the Madcap Library, exact location unspecified. Previous jobs include doughnut taster, Portable Hug Dispenser, and accidental lookout for a gang of bank robbers (don’t ask).

2. He originally wanted to be a pilot, but fell asleep during the selection process. He has since discovered that there are other ways of fulfilling his speed addiction, but he keeps the flying cap and goggles because he might need them.

3. His favourite food is hibiscus flowers, as it’s the Sloth equivalent of chocolate.

4. After a minor incident involving long claws and the banisters, the Sloth joined the Bark Scratcher’s Society, as it keeps his claws trimmed (which is why you will sometimes see deep grooves in the bark of trees). The subscription is fairly expensive but is happily paid for by the other members of the Library Staff, who like their clothes left intact on the frequent occasions when they get hugged by Duster.

5. The person he would most like to meet is Kelly Brook, as he thinks she would be exceptionally huggable. The Head Librarian fully agrees with this point of view.

There you go! I am being tagged quite a lot in writing games, so I will have another post coming up shortly on Things I Write…